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ASKED ON 01/30/2012

We just launched our website what can we do to b better .


We are offering currently free listings on vehicles on our clutter free online car auction , also we are working with car history companies to integrate a vin check and free to members car histroy fax .It is free as long as we can but we can not make it happen wothout your input . The next thing that we are working on is a info room where we can find pricing evaluations on a live conversation with live people just like the auction it will be serviced by human to prevent scams and pitfalls let us us know what we can do better .Infos at oaa123.com or @uarsales in twitter Thanks www.oaa123.com


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As someone who develops custom web content and related marketing materials, I'd suggest three things:

1. Reorganize the site. If I hadn't explored, I never would have found your welcome way off to the side, buried under News. That should be part of your home page.

2. Get a professional writer. Your site contains numerous typos, including "friends and colleges". You mean colleagues; otherwise you're talking to universities. You can't be seen as a professional, trustworthy, organization if you don't look like you never graduated grade school.

3. What are you doing to drive people TO this website? If I hadn't been exploring an relatively unknown section of Angie's List, I never would have even known about your site--or your service.

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ANSWERED ON 01/31/2012

You need to have somebody fix the misspellings and typing errors (the ? goes immediately after the last letter in the word, same as a period does.) It makes me doubt that bankers, pilots, and automotive professionals are involved.

Good pictures and easy to get to the next page, where I wanted to go.

What key words do you have imbedded so a search has your company come up? Unless they know your web address, they will never be able to find you. I did a search on "online auto auctions" and you didn't show up.

And you sell heavy equipment, too. I would never think by looking at your description and web address that you had anything like that for sale.

Where are you located? The fees for transport could knock your cars out of contention.
ANSWERED ON 02/28/2012

Thank you for answering the question,

We are in Saint Petersburg Florida. The transport of cars in the USA and world wide is taken care off at wholesale rates to the public.

To hire a professional writer good news! She will be starting in April with raised eyebrows :)

As far as the redesign for the page goes, we all know that this is and will be a constant work in progress. Updating and making it more and more user friendly is a part of the task to grow this idea and site.

Thanks for the feed back.

Source: http://www.oaa123.com

ANSWERED ON 03/13/2012